IIT JEE , AIEEE Forum - Articles Category , Community shelf - POEM cum RIDDLE cum TALE by sankydreams........

comment by sankydreams (posted on 24 Sep 2007 21:57:50 IST)

Well guyz, i fail to understand why u guyz werent able to guess, i guess there was something lacking in my narration: ( : (
EXPLANATION:-
The first para shows that the guy was shy, was intelligent and everyone loved him. In short, he was the ideal son who loved evryone and evryone loved him, i guess u can connect with that u all being good in academics.
There is nothing hidden in the second para. He finds his family murdered on returning from skool, the BIGGEST shock, hugest blow anyone can survive. Emotions unleashed, he must have mourned terribly.
The obvious question stood in front of him: What next?
The whole family gone in a single stroke, he had nobody for whom he wud have wanted to live. He decided to suicide.
But its hard to die when u havent seen anything, done anything, enjoyed this unreal world. He wasnt that strong or rather weak.
He decided to enjoy life, one last time : one month of worldly enjoyment before bidding his land a final gudbye.
He neednt wept wen he knew he wud be with his family in a months time. He spent all the remaining money (ofcourse the dacoits cant take EVERYTHING) to suppply pleasure, pure pleasure to all his senses.
After that he comitted suicide. Thats all. No dacoits, no food poisoning, no murders.

comment by sankydreams (posted on 24 Sep 2007 21:58:26 IST)

I apologized at end of article coz this poem ofcourse has a negative message. Unlike our desi movies, my hero doesnt rise above all odds to look into the eyes of success. In short, he loses the game named LIFE. I apologize yet again if this has any negative impact on u. Remember my hero was a loser, but u have to be a winner

comment by SowmyaTs (posted on 24 Sep 2007 22:33:45 IST)

hey........u've given a good explanation to ur poem.......!!!!!!!!
nd .........the fact that its all written by u makes it even more speciall........really hope 2 c more of such stuff from u.............!!!!!!

comment by Nithy (posted on 24 Sep 2007 23:16:06 IST)

what's so negative about it?? a story of a boy and what he did. Doesn't ask anybody to do the same. you needn't apologize so much......
he could have crashed straight down from a biplane after flying straight into the sunset..... with a person he loved...in a mad rush of speed......best way to end life.
great one sankydreams.