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thanx don .... i mean sitanshu..... if u liked it so much, y havnt i received ur rate for it??? nd as far as writing them is thr, i had already left them.....

Manasi....
NIT-Allahabad...

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Challenges are High, Dreams r New..
The World out thr is waiting for U !!
Dare to dream, Dare to Try..
No Goal is distant, no Star is too high !!!
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Why did u leave ur art????
see, when u hav a talent, trying to improve that will tremendously help u in the future.......
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Hey, everyone, read the foll poem....its a bit lengthy.....but toooooooooo good..
 
and...don't forget to rate it!!!
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Her hair was up in a ponytail....her favourite dress tied with a bow.
Today was daddy's day at school.......And she couldnt wait to go.
 
Her mommy tried to tell her....that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand...if she went alone...
 
She was not afraid....she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates.....of why he wasn't there today.
 
The little girl went to school.....eager to tell them all.
About a dad who never sees....a dad who never calls.....
 
One by one the teacher called....a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy......as seconds slowly passed.
 
At last the teacher called her name......every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching.......for a man who wasn't there.
 
From somewhere near the back....she heard a daddy say.
"looks like anoyher deadbet dad....too busy to waste his day"
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With her hands behind her back.....slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child......came words incredibly unique.
 
"My daddy couldn't be here.......bcos he lives so far away.
But i know he wishes he could be.....cos this is such a special day.
 
We used to share sunday fudges....and icecream in a cone.
And though u cannot see him....i m not here alone.
 
Cause my daddy's always with me......even though we are apart
I know bcos he told me....he'll forever be in my heart.
 
And from somewhere in the crowd of dads.....her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter.....who was wise beyond her years.
 
"I love my daddy very much....he's my shining star...
And if he could, he'd be here.......but heaven's just too far
 
U see, he was a fireman......and died just past this year
when planes hit the towers.....and made freedom very clear.
 
But sometimes when i close my eyes.....its never like he went away.
And then she closed her eyes.....and saw him there that day.
 
And to her mother's amazement....she saw with surprise.
A room full of dads and kids......all starting to close their eyes.
 
"I know u r with me daddy......to the silence she called out.
and what happened next made believers......of those once filled with doubt.
 
Not one in the room could explain it.....for each one closed their eyes.
And there on the desk beside her......was a long stemmed pink rose.
 
And a child was blessed if only for a moment,
by the love of her shining star.
And given the gift of believing...
that heaven's not too far.
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too good Gautham!
u composed it?

har kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahi milta,kahin zameen,toh kahin aasmaan nahi milta
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wonderful.
where do ya ppl collect all these?
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Take a salute frm my side
main to padte padte ro gaya!
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That one was mailed to me by my frnd.
she said that she found that in her mom's diary......
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gr8 one man!
take a salute frm my side.

i promise a salute for everyone who correctly answers my question.
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hey gautham yaar it's a greatest one
i am very glad u ppl share these types of things here on this site

I am very very thankful to you for giving us such a gr8 poem

PLZ DONT RATE ME FOR MY ANSWERS,IF U WANT TO COMPLIMENT ME THEN JUST HELP ANY OTHER IN FUTURE AS I AM DOING IT NOW

FILL THE UNFORGIVING MINUTE WITH 60 SECONDS THEN THE LIFE WILL BE YOURS

The woods are lovely, dark &deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep
-Robert Frost
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You 2 (Manasi and Gautham) are making this post absolutely a treat to read.

But I will pray that we meet at our goal(IIT)

You Get what u really want
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hey....mansi,,
u r really vry creative........n dis poem is vry awesome...
n hope u continue 2 write further n never stop
 
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surbhi mittal
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@ surbhi
thanx surbhi :)... but i hav already given up this... ab i cant even write 2 lines..... this was the last one :)
@ subhayan
thanx....nd even i w