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6 Mar 2007 13:13:28 IST
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HEY!MANASI OUTSTANDING poem
1st one[inhindi] is fantastic,salute to u as being it's ur original is so soulful..
it could be undestood only by emotional people
acc. to me,philosophy looks more beautiful & revealing in hindi,salute for that poem!!
i m also interested in philosophy very much..
i v aso made 3 lines just now,:
' Naa jaane is dard-bhari zindhagi mein kismat ne kitne karvatein li,
kitne khel khelein,aur kitne nahin,,
zingagi apne modh par chal rahi hai,mein apne par,
lekin jab kismat ko mere khel pe daya aagayi ,
meri kismat rang leke aagayi!!'
6 Mar 2007 18:06:57 IST
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not mine, but still nice
If You Have A Dream Don't wait for some distant day to come,
it may be too late before you've even begun.
Not everyone will agree with all you decide.
it may be too late before you've even begun.
Not everyone will agree with all you decide.
Be true to yourself first and foremost.
The only important thing in life is what you do
with the time you spend here on earth.
The only important thing in life is what you do
with the time you spend here on earth.
Don't be afraid to follow your desires,
they are not silly nor selfish.
Take the time and do what makes you feel alive.
they are not silly nor selfish.
Take the time and do what makes you feel alive.
Leave your fears and regrets in the past,
for this is where they belong.
Don't cloud today with things that can't be undone.
for this is where they belong.
Don't cloud today with things that can't be undone.
You have no more control over yesterday or tomorrow,
than you do the raging of your passions.
Do not quiet these dreams nor quench your desires.
than you do the raging of your passions.
Do not quiet these dreams nor quench your desires.
For if you do, your journey is ended.
You have only today to begin anew and follow your dreams.
For in the end all we have are our memories.
You have only today to begin anew and follow your dreams.
For in the end all we have are our memories.
When the twilight comes to us, let there be,
No excuses, no explanations, no regrets!
No excuses, no explanations, no regrets!
7 Mar 2007 00:16:47 IST
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I got inspiration from you now get inspiration from my first creation
Believe in yourself?
in the power you have
to control your own life
day by day.
Believe in the strength
that you have deep inside
and your faith will help
show you the way.
Believe in tomorrow
and what it will bring,
let a hopeful heart
carry you through
for things will work out
if you trust and believe
there?s no limit
to what you can do!
Please tell if there is scope for some improvement
Believe in yourself?
in the power you have
to control your own life
day by day.
Believe in the strength
that you have deep inside
and your faith will help
show you the way.
Believe in tomorrow
and what it will bring,
let a hopeful heart
carry you through
for things will work out
if you trust and believe
there?s no limit
to what you can do!
Please tell if there is scope for some improvement
9 Mar 2007 01:21:29 IST
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hey mansi.............as usually she writes superb.........and shubayan is also superb..............................
AS everybody is saying..................... inspirational thoughts so why should i be behind................... it is 4 all intellectual people...........
1)
zindagi ki asli udan abhi baki hai...........
apne erado ka imtehan abhi baaki hai...................
abhi to naapi hai mutthi bhar zameen..............................
aage abhi saara AASMAN baaki hai.......................................
and next one for all those who belive in GOD..
2)
wHEN GOD solves ur prblms u have faith in his abilities.....................
but........................
when he doesnt solve ur prblms.......................
remember
he has faith in your abilities.................................
okkkkkkkkkkkk
amd my fav....... inspirational sentence..........(everybody knows)...................
"BELIEVE IN URSELF BCOZ I BELIEVE IN U".............
sacchi mein................
thanks.....................
16 Mar 2007 19:25:49 IST
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hindi poem
sundar aasaman par ghumadate jo badal
fail gaya nabh tak jaise dharti ma ka aanchal
bund bund se unse tapkta amrat
us madhuras ka pan karke ho gaya man sukrat
koyal gan karke rijha rahi hai
madhur kandh se samjha rahi hai
aa gayi hai suhavani varsha
dekhkar jise man harsha
thodi thodi dhup ne bada diya aanand
mast mast jhumne lage sab aanand
sapt rango ka indradhanush ab aya
man mayur nache jaise dharti par swarg aya
ghatao ka lagaya ambar ne kajal
sundar aasaman par ghumadate jo badal
plz reply me if u like this!
17 Mar 2007 21:24:52 IST
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A bit sad one.......
Shayad unko samajh na aaya
kya thi meri mann ki baat.....
dekh kinara utar gaye wo,
lehron se lade hum saari raat....
saath rahe sab rishte naate,
bhatke mann bas saari raat...
peele pad gaye unke kagaz,
nayi rahi unki har baat...
unki raatein ho gayi chotti,
lambi reh gayi meri raat..
sunte aaye sab hi ke kisse,
kaise kahein hum apni baat....
pathron se bhi phoote jharane, meri suni jab saari raat..
17 Mar 2007 21:29:01 IST
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wah wah !!!!!!!!
main to kehta hun ki tum iit de k kya karoge tum sab poet ban jao
accha nupur i m posting that poem tooo!!!!!
monsoon rain or summer heat
u r the reason y i breathe
tell me dear wat is sweet
is that u or ur heart that beats!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is to all my frnz now
main to kehta hun ki tum iit de k kya karoge tum sab poet ban jao
accha nupur i m posting that poem tooo!!!!!
monsoon rain or summer heat
u r the reason y i breathe
tell me dear wat is sweet
is that u or ur heart that beats!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is to all my frnz now















u composed it?