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Tagged with:       [Post New]posted on 27 Oct 2007 15:37:33 IST    
here's a beautiful prose......cum poem....
we hav it in our english text buk.......
i liked it very much ,,,,,so thougt of sharing wid u'lll.
hope u'll like it...........
 
 
 LETTER FROM GOD.....
 
        As u got up in this..
       morning, i watched u,
       & hoped that u would...
       talk 2 me...,even if just a
       few words, asking                      my                                                          opinion...or                                                                                                  thankin' me
       for something good..... that    happened in ur life
        yesterday, but u were
    2222 .... busy ,trying to find
        d right outfit 2 wear....
                     
           when u ran aroud
         d house gettin' ready,
         i knew there would b a
             few minutes 4 u 2
        stop & say hello,...but..
           u wer 2 busy 2 do..
      so........at a point 4 15 minutes
             u had nothing 2 do 
    ---u ran 2 d phon & called a friend
        to get d latest gossip........
                          
                i noticed that b4
                 lunch u looked
            around ,& i thought
                  may be.......
          u felt embarrassed...
             2 talk 2 me...that..
          is why u didn't bow
            ur head ..u glanced
        three or four tables over
         & u noticed some of
         ur friendz talkin' 2 me
                briefly b4 they
            ate , but u didn't....
          but there's still more time
       left  ...,& hope that u wil
           talk 2 me............
                     
          u went home and after 
          a few chores u turned
                 on d TV set....
          i waited patienly again
          as u watched TV &
          ate ur meal , but again
             u didn't talk 2 me....
           bedtime i guess u
             felt 2222.. tired
           after u said good nite
        2 ur family u got into bed&
         promptly fell asleep........
    u know ..,i 've got patiencemore
          than u 'll ever know.....
                        
            i luv u so much that
         i wait everyday for a nod...
          prayer or thought,...it is
          hard 2 hav a one sided
          'conversation'......well,
            u r gettin' up once again....
            & once againi 'll wait
                 with nothing
                  but luv 4 u.
            hoping that 2day u
         will gimme some time....
                      
           have a nice day!!!
 
 
do tellme if u p'pl like it or not   !!!
 
 
 
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iitkgp_bipin
iitkgp_bipin is offline comment by iitkgp_bipin    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 16:14:55 IST)
superbbb....keep posting........
pratikanand
pratikanand is offline comment by pratikanand    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 19:58:26 IST)
ooohhh la la la. nice article on pretty nice topic. keep it up..
sweetsiya1990 is offline comment by sweetsiya1990    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 20:33:07 IST)
great
nithika is offline comment by nithika    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 21:13:17 IST)
article is tooo good
shohitaa
shohitaa is offline comment by shohitaa    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 22:00:03 IST)
really nice
aditya_arora04
aditya_arora04 is offline comment by aditya_arora04    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 22:38:50 IST)
Excellent
anil_kapoor
anil_kapoor is offline comment by anil_kapoor    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 22:53:10 IST)
really wonderful
deedee
deedee is offline comment by deedee    (posted on 27 Oct 2007 23:11:33 IST)
danku.........:)
chimanshu_007
chimanshu_007 is offline comment by chimanshu_007    (posted on 28 Oct 2007 12:27:02 IST)
hmmm nice...really nice :) :)
aankurverma
aankurverma is offline comment by aankurverma    (posted on 28 Oct 2007 16:00:58 IST)
well really nice sis :) :) :)
pal_sodhi91
pal_sodhi91 is offline comment by pal_sodhi91    (posted on 28 Oct 2007 16:59:21 IST)
nice one deedee !!
whacky is offline comment by whacky    (posted on 28 Oct 2007 20:09:45 IST)
great!
deedee
deedee is offline comment by deedee    (posted on 29 Oct 2007 13:55:39 IST)
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
rimjhim_achieveurdreams
rimjhim_achieveurdreams is offline comment by rimjhim_achieveurdreams    (posted on 30 Oct 2007 20:20:54 IST)
That was 2222222222222 good.

It was lovely and and displayed innocence.........
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