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hey guys....write the best ever sher u liked....whether it is self written or whether its copied never mind.....
Tum khafa hogaye to koi khushi na rahegi, Tere bina chirago me
roshni na rahegi;
Kya kahe kya guzregi dil par,Zinda to rahenge par zindagi na rahegi.,..........
roshni na rahegi;
Kya kahe kya guzregi dil par,Zinda to rahenge par zindagi na rahegi.,..........
Rehne de aasma zamin ki talash kar, sab kuch yahi hai na kahi aur
talash kar, har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza, jine k liye bas 1
kami ki talash kar.
talash kar, har arzu puri ho to jine ka kya maza, jine k liye bas 1
kami ki talash kar.
Karoge yaad gujre jamane ko,
tarsoge humare sath 1 pal bitane ko,
fir awaz doge hume vapas bulane ko,
or hum kahenge darwaja nhi h kabr se bahar aane ko.
tarsoge humare sath 1 pal bitane ko,
fir awaz doge hume vapas bulane ko,
or hum kahenge darwaja nhi h kabr se bahar aane ko.
Hamare zakhmo ki vajhah bhi wo hai.. Hamare zakhmo ki Dava bhi wo
hai... Wo namak zakmo pe lagaye to kya hua... Mohabbat karne ki
wazah bhi wo hai...
hai... Wo namak zakmo pe lagaye to kya hua... Mohabbat karne ki
wazah bhi wo hai...
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Gaurav |spideyunlimited| Ragtah
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22 Sep 2007 23:19:01 IST
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hey check this out,, :P .. a bit of each subject i study in school - english , physics, computers, chemistry and math.
Take a bit of Shakespeare's trait, accelerate it up straight, pass it through a NOR gate, add ammonium sulphate,and slowly differentiate!
lol :P
*rate if u liked it*
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23 Sep 2007 19:19:24 IST
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zindagi hai woh.........
jaise hawaa ko kisi ne dekha nahin,
phir bhi uske hone ka ehsaas hai ;
meri nazron se ojhal hai woh,
phir bhi mere dil ki dhadkanon ke paas hai.
baadal se nikli har boond ko , jaise zameen se milne ki pyaas hai ;
meri khamosh in aankhon ko bas ek usi ki talaash hai.
zindagi se milaya hai usne mujhe,
lekin meri zindagi ab ban gayi hai woh ;
main usse kabhi mila toh nahin,
par uska ho chuka hoon, meri ho gayi hai woh .
aaj jo khanak hai is aawaz mein, uski wajah ban gayi hai woh;
kabhi aankhon ki nami , toh kabhi labon ki hansi banke thirakne lagi hai woh.
mere chehre ka noor, meri aankhon ki chamak ban gayi hai woh ;
jo khamoshi mein gaata hoon, labon ka woh geet ban gayi hai woh.
main jaanta hun, aaj use bhi mujhse milne ka intezaar hai,
meri har saans ko pehchanti hai woh ;
kahin door palkein bijhaye, mujhpar aitbaar kar,
mere pyaar ko sambhale baidhi hai woh...........
hws tht ?????
jaise hawaa ko kisi ne dekha nahin,
phir bhi uske hone ka ehsaas hai ;
meri nazron se ojhal hai woh,
phir bhi mere dil ki dhadkanon ke paas hai.
baadal se nikli har boond ko , jaise zameen se milne ki pyaas hai ;
meri khamosh in aankhon ko bas ek usi ki talaash hai.
zindagi se milaya hai usne mujhe,
lekin meri zindagi ab ban gayi hai woh ;
main usse kabhi mila toh nahin,
par uska ho chuka hoon, meri ho gayi hai woh .
aaj jo khanak hai is aawaz mein, uski wajah ban gayi hai woh;
kabhi aankhon ki nami , toh kabhi labon ki hansi banke thirakne lagi hai woh.
mere chehre ka noor, meri aankhon ki chamak ban gayi hai woh ;
jo khamoshi mein gaata hoon, labon ka woh geet ban gayi hai woh.
main jaanta hun, aaj use bhi mujhse milne ka intezaar hai,
meri har saans ko pehchanti hai woh ;
kahin door palkein bijhaye, mujhpar aitbaar kar,
mere pyaar ko sambhale baidhi hai woh...........
hws tht ?????
25 Sep 2007 14:51:38 IST
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Shayari me apni kalam se
is toote dil ki daastaan likhta hoon
jo haqeeqat na ban saka
wo adhoora armaan likhta hoon
jo wo khuda oadh kar kabool kar le
wahi ek farmaan likhta hoon
us dard ko jo is dil me hai
WO jisse hai anjaan likhta hoon
jise bhoolne ki koshish nakaam ho rahi hai
WO NAAM, WO PEHCHAAN likhta hoon......
is toote dil ki daastaan likhta hoon
jo haqeeqat na ban saka
wo adhoora armaan likhta hoon
jo wo khuda oadh kar kabool kar le
wahi ek farmaan likhta hoon
us dard ko jo is dil me hai
WO jisse hai anjaan likhta hoon
jise bhoolne ki koshish nakaam ho rahi hai
WO NAAM, WO PEHCHAAN likhta hoon......
25 Sep 2007 15:06:24 IST
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AISI APNI WIFE HO
5.2 JISKI HEIGHT HO
CHERA JISKA BRIGHT HO
WEIGHT ME THODI LIGHT HO
UMAR ME DIFFERENCE SLIGHT HO
THODI SI WOH QUITE HO
AISIAPNI WIFE HO
5.2 JISKI HEIGHT HO
CHERA JISKA BRIGHT HO
WEIGHT ME THODI LIGHT HO
UMAR ME DIFFERENCE SLIGHT HO
THODI SI WOH QUITE HO
AISIAPNI WIFE HO
BHID ME CHALE TO SAB KAHE SIDE HO SIDE HO
INDIA KI PAIDAISH HO
SASS KI SEVA JISKI KWAISH HO
AISI APNI WIFE HO
DINNER CANDLE LIGHT HO
DONO ME KABHI NA FIGHT HO
MILNE KE BAAD DIL DELIGHT HO
HEY PRABHU TERI SEVA USKI LIFE HO
YEH KAVITA PAR KE SAB KAHE TUM RIGHT HO
INDIA KI PAIDAISH HO
SASS KI SEVA JISKI KWAISH HO
AISI APNI WIFE HO
DINNER CANDLE LIGHT HO
DONO ME KABHI NA FIGHT HO
MILNE KE BAAD DIL DELIGHT HO
HEY PRABHU TERI SEVA USKI LIFE HO
YEH KAVITA PAR KE SAB KAHE TUM RIGHT HO
28 Sep 2007 21:14:43 IST
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Shayari me apni kalam se
is toote dil ki daastaan likhta hoon
jo haqeeqat na ban saka
wo adhoora armaan likhta hoon
jo wo khuda oadh kar kabool kar le
wahi ek farmaan likhta hoon
us dard ko jo is dil me hai
WO jisse hai anjaan likhta hoon
jise bhoolne ki koshish nakaam ho rahi hai
WO NAAM, WO PEHCHAAN likhta hoon......
is toote dil ki daastaan likhta hoon
jo haqeeqat na ban saka
wo adhoora armaan likhta hoon
jo wo khuda oadh kar kabool kar le
wahi ek farmaan likhta hoon
us dard ko jo is dil me hai
WO jisse hai anjaan likhta hoon
jise bhoolne ki koshish nakaam ho rahi hai
WO NAAM, WO PEHCHAAN likhta hoon......
30 Sep 2007 00:48:30 IST
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hum kisi ko tahe dil se chahte hain
wo chahte hain kisi aur ko ye aur baat hai
unke liye ye jaan bhi denge
wo jante nahi ye aur baat hai
unke intezaar me hum palken bichaye baithe hain
ye intezaar hai bekaar ye aur baat hai
unki aankhon me kho jaane ki tamanna hai
wo nazren milate hi nahi ye aur baat hai
jinke liye humne ye mehfil sajaayi hai
unhe intezaar hai kisi aur ka ye aur baat hai
aaj, is mehfil me jaana unhe kitni mohabbat hai humse
ye pehle nahi jaante the...ye aur baat hai....
wo chahte hain kisi aur ko ye aur baat hai
unke liye ye jaan bhi denge
wo jante nahi ye aur baat hai
unke intezaar me hum palken bichaye baithe hain
ye intezaar hai bekaar ye aur baat hai
unki aankhon me kho jaane ki tamanna hai
wo nazren milate hi nahi ye aur baat hai
jinke liye humne ye mehfil sajaayi hai
unhe intezaar hai kisi aur ka ye aur baat hai
aaj, is mehfil me jaana unhe kitni mohabbat hai humse
ye pehle nahi jaante the...ye aur baat hai....
30 Sep 2007 10:38:16 IST
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saansein chubhati hain mere seene mai
khanjar ki tarah
Jindagi lagti hai ab dur ke
manjar ki tarah
Ek bhi katra muhabbat ka
mukaddar na bana
Hum bhatakte rahe duniya mai
samander ki tarah
Dur tak apne siva kuch bhi
na dekha usne
Hum khade rah gaye bus raah ke
manjar ki tarah
Unki yaadon se kaho koi
naya ghar dhoondhein
Jindagi apni hai girte hue
khandehar ki tarah
khanjar ki tarah
Jindagi lagti hai ab dur ke
manjar ki tarah
Ek bhi katra muhabbat ka
mukaddar na bana
Hum bhatakte rahe duniya mai
samander ki tarah
Dur tak apne siva kuch bhi
na dekha usne
Hum khade rah gaye bus raah ke
manjar ki tarah
Unki yaadon se kaho koi
naya ghar dhoondhein
Jindagi apni hai girte hue
khandehar ki tarah
30 Sep 2007 19:23:37 IST
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himanshu this is for u................................
i love the way u talk and smile,
for u i can go to that extra mile.
i love u forever,for u i'll wait
yrs will pass,i won't count the date.
i am with u for each moment of ur life
don't ever b sad ,don't ever u sigh.
my soul u'll find everywhere
close ur eyes and i'll b there.
30 Sep 2007 20:04:44 IST
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Tere honton Ki Hasi Banane ka Khwab hai,
Tere Aagosh main Simat Jane Ka Khwab Hai,
Tu Lakh Bacha Le Daman Ishq Ke Hathon, Aasma Ban Kar Tujh Par Cha Jane Ka Khwab Hai,
Ajmayish Yu To Acchi Nahi Hoti Ishq ki, Tu Chahe To Teri Takdir Banane Ka Khwab Hai,
Wo Maut Bhi Laut Jaye Tere Darwaje Pe Aa Ke, Tujh Ko Aisi Zindgi Dene Ka Khwab Hai,
Jee Bhi Lenge Agar Jina Pada Tera Bina, Lakin Tujh Par To Mar Mitne Ka Khwab Hai....!
Tere Aagosh main Simat Jane Ka Khwab Hai,
Tu Lakh Bacha Le Daman Ishq Ke Hathon, Aasma Ban Kar Tujh Par Cha Jane Ka Khwab Hai,
Ajmayish Yu To Acchi Nahi Hoti Ishq ki, Tu Chahe To Teri Takdir Banane Ka Khwab Hai,
Wo Maut Bhi Laut Jaye Tere Darwaje Pe Aa Ke, Tujh Ko Aisi Zindgi Dene Ka Khwab Hai,
Jee Bhi Lenge Agar Jina Pada Tera Bina, Lakin Tujh Par To Mar Mitne Ka Khwab Hai....!
30 Sep 2007 20:05:38 IST
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n dis funny one 2
Bohat roka dil ko, magar yeh kho gaya
phir rafta rafta tumse pyar ho gaya..!!
Iss jhooti duniya me, jhoote Rishtonke bheis me
Muzhe tum mil gaye, aur pyar ho gaya..!!
hota raha shor, aur uss shoor-o-ghul me
Ek bar tum ko suna, aur pyar ho gaya..!!
garajte rahe baadal... barasta raha sawan
barish ki pehli boond padi, aur pyar ho gaya..!!!
roz jeeta tha, main roz marta tha
ab ke bar tum pe mara, aur pyar ho gaya..!!!!
phir rafta rafta tumse pyar ho gaya..!!
Iss jhooti duniya me, jhoote Rishtonke bheis me
Muzhe tum mil gaye, aur pyar ho gaya..!!
hota raha shor, aur uss shoor-o-ghul me
Ek bar tum ko suna, aur pyar ho gaya..!!
garajte rahe baadal... barasta raha sawan
barish ki pehli boond padi, aur pyar ho gaya..!!!
roz jeeta tha, main roz marta tha
ab ke bar tum pe mara, aur pyar ho gaya..!!!!
30 Sep 2007 20:08:51 IST
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well this is my 1st experience of writing poem on luv so srry if d words r not proper but m trying to make it good next poem which i will write soon.I used to write on sad basically n i have posted my few poems on this forum too
anyways hope u all like it
30 Sep 2007 20:55:42 IST
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well i can just say thanx
(its the best thing or best words i have recieved ever)....
well i have sth for u too , but its not written by me
hope u like it
wen the night comes look at the sky
if u see a falling star , dont wonder y
just make a wish close ur eyes
trust me it will come true
bcoz i did it and i found u
i have got ur back & u have got mine
i will help u out anytime
2 c u hurt 2 c u cry
makes me weep and wanna die
i will be right here till the end
coz u r my love & my best frnd
(its the best thing or best words i have recieved ever)....well i have sth for u too , but its not written by me

hope u like it
wen the night comes look at the sky
if u see a falling star , dont wonder y
just make a wish close ur eyes
trust me it will come true
bcoz i did it and i found u
i have got ur back & u have got mine
i will help u out anytime
2 c u hurt 2 c u cry
makes me weep and wanna die
i will be right here till the end
coz u r my love & my best frnd
30 Sep 2007 22:22:46 IST
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Yun toh mere sher zamane ke liye hai
par kuch sher unko sunane ke liye hai
aankhon mein rakhoge toh kaaton se chubhenge
yeh sher toh palkon par sajane ke liye hai
ab yun bhi nahi ki har dard ko mita dia jaaye
yeh dard toh seene se lagane ke liye hai
dekha jaaye toh kya cheez hai yeh badan
lekin yeh badan toh sirf aag bhujane ke liye hai.......
lets c how many of u can understand its true meanin
if neone gets it thn nudge me......
par kuch sher unko sunane ke liye hai
aankhon mein rakhoge toh kaaton se chubhenge
yeh sher toh palkon par sajane ke liye hai
ab yun bhi nahi ki har dard ko mita dia jaaye
yeh dard toh seene se lagane ke liye hai
dekha jaaye toh kya cheez hai yeh badan
lekin yeh badan toh sirf aag bhujane ke liye hai.......
lets c how many of u can understand its true meanin
if neone gets it thn nudge me......
1 Oct 2007 22:19:19 IST
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I m NoT DaT SWeee.....t KI diAbeties HO jaye,
nOT daT SALty ki B.P. bAad Jaye,
not DaT tASty KI maJA aa jAYE...................,
...........
bUT NeIThER dAT biTtEr
kI kaBhi yAAd na AAYe ....
.....................

4 MY DEAR FRNDZZZZZ OVER HERE.....
ur ......walkin' on a long bridge,
it's really scary & u askd me 2 hold hand ...................................................
but i said i can't coz im busy holding d bridge 4 u...........
there's 1 more here wid me but i feel gals will kill me if i post it ..........if gal's u'll r ready then i'll post it...............do tell if u'll r.............

2 Oct 2007 17:16:14 IST
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Jinke liye humne saare gum sahe
jinke khatir hum hum na rahe
jinhe dekhne ke liye taraste the nain
na dekhu jinhe to hota tha man bechain
saari dunia se takraya main jinke vaste
aaj woh kehte hai k woh hume nahi jante
jinki khushi ke liye hum saare aasu pee gaye
hasna na aaya fir bhi haste chale gaye
jinke liye din bhar main rota tha
khuli aankho se saari raat main sota tha
aaj un lamho ko woh nahi mante
woh kehte hai k woh hume nahi jante
jinke khatir hum hum na rahe
jinhe dekhne ke liye taraste the nain
na dekhu jinhe to hota tha man bechain
saari dunia se takraya main jinke vaste
aaj woh kehte hai k woh hume nahi jante
jinki khushi ke liye hum saare aasu pee gaye
hasna na aaya fir bhi haste chale gaye
jinke liye din bhar main rota tha
khuli aankho se saari raat main sota tha
aaj un lamho ko woh nahi mante
woh kehte hai k woh hume nahi jante
4 Oct 2007 21:08:13 IST
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qaraar me bhi ye dil beqaraar hone laga hai
jaane se kiska intezaar hone laga hai
jab unki chahat sar chad k boli
tab ye jaana unse pyaar hone laga hai....
teri tareef karne k liye alfaz dhoondhta hoon
tujhpar jache jo ghazal wo saaz dhoondhta hoon
tere dil k kone me jo pyar hai mere liye
jo tu muj hi se chipaati hai wo raaz dhoondhta hoon...
maykhano me paymaane bane
geet ki ghazal se taraane bane
jabse tumne dekha hai un qatil nigahon se sanam
tabse hai hum tere deewane bane....













