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31 Aug 2007 20:30:36 IST
deadly story .... must read
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It was dark, it was chilly and raining heavily. There was a ghostly wind howling admist the street dogs.The current supply was gone. It was complete darkness, pitch black. I was lying on my bed. My body was sore and batterd. I desperately needed rest.
I was asleep but still a bit awake due to my pain and fear.
Suddenly the alarm went off showing 3 'o' clock. It was a deadly sound. I thought it was loud for the whole city to get up. I could not bear that noise any more. I lifted my left arm groping for the clock in dark. My hand found the knob and I pressed it. But there were still dogs howling outside.
I knew that it was time, I knew it, now it is the time to do it. I could'nt but i had to. I had done it all the previous day from dawn to the dusk. But still I had to do??My hand, head ached but still I had to do. None cared if I liked it or not. If I wouldnt do it they shreak at me ... I was terrified at that thought.
slowly I got up. My legs could not hold my weight. They were knobbly I thought that they'd give me away. But I held the edge of the bed and strutted a few steps swiching on the light. But I rememberd then that the power was cut off. I walked slowly to the kitchen and took out a candle and lighted it with a match stick. I walked to the bathroom and kept the candle on the washbasin. This was too much for me ..... I collapsed on the ground, my night gown was totally wet. I was shivering in cold. Slowly I caught the edge of the sink and got up, I opened the tap and splashed water on my sleepy eyes.. I did it once again with a force this time I was feeling better
Slowly I took the candle and walked back to my room. I placed the candle upon my table. I did'nt want to do it at all!!!! but still I had to do...I know I had to do it.... No girl with senses will want to do it.... but now i have no other go .. i must do it, I dont have any other choice. I walked to the cupboard and opened it. My heart was pulling back my hand ... now, I saw what was lying in there,,, I stood looking at them gravely, now there was a pin drop scilence all arround, Scilence built its kingdom there...and my heart was heavier than ever.... I desperately did'nt want to to it
-not at all-
But then I slowly took my Integration-Calculus book and started to do the assignment given by my maths sir. Im supposed to submit the assignment today. But GOD .... I just did'nt want to do it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
................ did u like it??? I wrote it by myself .... just for some fun
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Neeraj Agarwal
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31 Aug 2007 20:38:55 IST
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nice ....
1 Sep 2007 07:23:58 IST
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hehhehe wat a beginnin a n end.. mind blowin a salute 2 uuu
1 Sep 2007 09:58:25 IST
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wow...what a class by lalsa.....hope i can give as many salutes...to u........fantastic....fabulous......and mind blowing....a must read for everyone...
1 Sep 2007 11:04:53 IST
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Nice creative writing.... keep it up
One day u will become a good novel Writer.....
all the best:):):)
One day u will become a good novel Writer.....
all the best:):):)
1 Sep 2007 14:01:46 IST
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thn snoopy, u all made my attempt successful. thnx neeraj, nivedh, srujana, riaa(roshni), sohitha & Heman. sidarth, u encouraged my first article . @Sam26kal.. yaa beginning is far different frm ending.... Don thanks yaar thank u so much for the compliments, Nala.. thnx for ur wishes and Ashvin, thanks yaar....
im glad tht i have so many supporting frnds here.... :):):):) thank for ur rates also ..
im glad tht i have so many supporting frnds here.... :):):):) thank for ur rates also ..
1 Sep 2007 15:16:50 IST
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great style u have got.
cool .u made something ordinary quite gripping.
cool .u made something ordinary quite gripping.
2 Sep 2007 11:34:17 IST
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gr8.............nice work.....................keep it up
3 Sep 2007 19:20:24 IST
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oh that's was really very nice and cool tooo........
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