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Tagged with:    [Post New]posted on 31 Aug 2007 20:30:36 IST    
It was dark, it was chilly and raining heavily. There was a ghostly wind howling admist the street dogs.The current supply was gone. It was complete darkness, pitch black. I was lying on my bed. My body was sore and batterd. I desperately needed rest.
 I was asleep but still a bit awake due to my pain and fear.
 
Suddenly the alarm went off showing 3 'o' clock. It was a deadly sound. I thought it was loud for the whole city to get up. I could not bear that noise any more. I lifted my left arm groping for the clock in dark. My hand found the knob and I pressed it. But there were still dogs howling outside.
 
I knew that it was time, I knew it, now it is the time to do it. I could'nt but i had to. I had done it all the previous day from dawn to the dusk. But still I had to do??My hand, head ached but still I had to do. None cared if I liked it or not. If I wouldnt do it they shreak at me ... I was terrified at that thought.
 
slowly I got up. My legs could not hold my weight. They were knobbly I thought that they'd give me away. But I held the edge of the bed and strutted a few steps swiching on the light. But I rememberd then that the power was cut off. I walked slowly to the kitchen and took out a candle and lighted it with a match stick. I walked to the bathroom and kept the candle on the washbasin. This was too much for me ..... I collapsed on the ground, my night gown was totally wet. I was shivering in cold. Slowly I caught the edge of the sink and got up, I opened the tap and splashed water on my sleepy eyes.. I did it once again with a force this time I was feeling better
 
Slowly I took the candle and walked back to my room. I placed the candle upon my table. I did'nt want to do it at all!!!! but still I had to do...I know I had to do it.... No girl with senses will want to do it.... but now i have no other go .. i must do it, I dont have any other choice. I walked to the cupboard and opened it. My heart was pulling back my hand ... now, I saw what was lying in there,,, I stood looking at them gravely, now there was a pin drop scilence all arround, Scilence built its kingdom there...and my heart was heavier than ever.... I desperately did'nt want to to it
-not at all-
 
But then I slowly took my Integration-Calculus book and started to do the assignment given by my maths sir. Im supposed to submit the assignment today. But GOD .... I just did'nt want to do it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
................ did u like it??? I wrote it by myself .... just for some fun
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neeraj_agarwal_1990
neeraj_agarwal_1990 is offline comment by neeraj_agarwal_1990    (posted on 31 Aug 2007 20:38:55 IST)
nice ....
snoopy
snoopy is offline comment by snoopy    (posted on 31 Aug 2007 20:55:03 IST)
good attempt..
nivedh_89
nivedh_89 is offline comment by nivedh_89    (posted on 31 Aug 2007 20:59:25 IST)
good.......!!!!!!!!!!!
srujana
srujana is offline comment by srujana    (posted on 31 Aug 2007 21:25:51 IST)
good.....................
riaa_rocks
riaa_rocks is offline comment by riaa_rocks    (posted on 31 Aug 2007 21:45:43 IST)
gud........
shohitaa
shohitaa is offline comment by shohitaa    (posted on 31 Aug 2007 22:14:43 IST)
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
siddharthsaxena
siddharthsaxena is offline comment by siddharthsaxena    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 02:49:21 IST)
UR FIRST ARTICLE - U DESERVE A RATE
heman
heman is offline comment by heman    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 03:57:07 IST)
nice
sam26kal
sam26kal is offline comment by sam26kal    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 07:23:58 IST)
hehhehe wat a beginnin a n end.. mind blowin a salute 2 uuu
DON007
DON007 is offline comment by DON007    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 09:58:25 IST)
wow...what a class by lalsa.....hope i can give as many salutes...to u........fantastic....fabulous......and mind blowing....a must read for everyone...
NALA
NALA is offline comment by NALA    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 11:04:53 IST)
Nice creative writing.... keep it up
One day u will become a good novel Writer.....
all the best:):):)
a5hw1n_5
a5hw1n_5 is offline comment by a5hw1n_5    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 13:31:19 IST)
Fantastic!!!!!!!
lalsa
lalsa is offline comment by lalsa    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 14:01:46 IST)
thn snoopy, u all made my attempt successful. thnx neeraj, nivedh, srujana, riaa(roshni), sohitha & Heman. sidarth, u encouraged my first article . @Sam26kal.. yaa beginning is far different frm ending.... Don thanks yaar thank u so much for the compliments, Nala.. thnx for ur wishes and Ashvin, thanks yaar....
im glad tht i have so many supporting frnds here.... :):):):) thank for ur rates also ..
Nithy
Nithy is offline comment by Nithy    (posted on 1 Sep 2007 15:16:50 IST)
great style u have got.
cool .u made something ordinary quite gripping.
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