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11 Oct 2008 12:24:23 IST

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Man it moves me and may be u

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Hiee frnds

Mee again but wid a poem

Actually eng exam was dere so thought dis

I bet u?ll like this

JJJJYET UNTITLED JJJJ

WITH JOYS I CHEERED

AND SORROWS BROUGHT ME TEARS

GOOD TYM BROUGHT GLORY

BAD TIME MADE ME FEEL SORRY

Medals used to glitter in my eyes

But failures were accompanied by cry

Till I realize

That happiness is inside

Somewhere in the depth of heart

There r joys n sorrows living apart

Let us bring them together

As it?s a thing that only matters

To balance the equation (of lyf )

N that will bring real satisfaction

Logic lives wid art

Though poles apart

Then how can pain be alone ?

Sooner or later joys too will come

After the storm comes the calm

When success is over , failures alarm!!!!!!!!!

Yes it alarms ! and gets u down

How high u fly ,The feet must ground

If brian has got weight , it hangs down

But an empty vessel makes no sound

I can see well now , that trophies gather dust

The mist is clear that , inner strength is must

Failure comes to those who r strong enough to face

Whether tym is good or bad ,Those who never loose that pace

Whats gonna happen is it ever known to neone????????

Cheer up folks !!!!becoz worst is yet to come

-pink_ele(hehehe)

No rates but yes if u visit then plzzzzzzzzzzzcomment

(Plzzz frnds don take last line seriously,

I pray wholeheartedly that best comes to u ppl)

BLESS U

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Hot goIITian

Joined: 12 Jun 2008 12:19:46 IST

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11 Oct 2008 15:34:11 IST

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what a nice and realstic poetry!!!!! gr8 job

Scorching goIITian

Joined: 9 Oct 2008 13:21:51 IST

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11 Oct 2008 17:32:23 IST

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it was all really cool till the last line.seems like you ended up saving the WORSTfor the last.anyways the originality and imagination in it was superb.KEEP IT UP!!!

divya ...struggling

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Joined: 24 Aug 2008 17:29:57 IST

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11 Oct 2008 20:48:12 IST

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well dude
ur poetry is very soothing n it does acts as something which cud help ppl live their lives in an awesome way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

madhuri sharma

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12 Oct 2008 09:27:54 IST

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very nice.......thanks for advice

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