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my first poem.......!!!!!

Nishant Pandey

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28 Jul 2009 13:14:36 IST

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my first poem.......!!!!!

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....... Love is in the air,

i can see & feel u everywhere .

your smile looks so cute,

which have no substitute .

the weather i getting stormy

but you don't scare,

we are together for beloved's care .

thanking God for being with you,

and in blinking of eye falling in love with you .

in your arms & with your affection,

i have found a moment of perfection .

holding your hand all the time,

just because you are truly mine ..

let u go far apart,

in the peace of my heart ..

we ll have a world there,

having a divine soul forever,,

i ll keep you happy always,

whether our age decays ..

you are my heart, my soul & my treasure,

mine today,tomorrow & forever ..

my everything...$$$.....

.................................................................................

this is dedicated to my beloved...!!

i would like to recieve your comments..

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veulent voler haut ...iina

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29 Jul 2009 00:27:56 IST

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a lovely poem.!!..!...nd really i appreciate ur writing skills ..

Nishant Pandey

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29 Jul 2009 10:10:11 IST

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thank you.........very much..!!!

hot goiitian

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1 Aug 2009 15:32:21 IST

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superb dude! how did ur "beloved" like it?

isha dudeja

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2 Oct 2009 19:33:54 IST

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marvelous nishi......it's very interesting ;likely to be written by heart....

Usha Sree

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5 Dec 2009 23:20:31 IST

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superbb

Nishant Pandey

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23 Dec 2009 17:30:04 IST

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@hot goiitian... yar she is much close after this..

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