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Tagged with:    [Post New]posted on 22 Dec 2007 00:23:44 IST    
Greetings to all  fellow members,guests and experts..
Its my experience that while we are engrossed in something,we are usually oblivious to the pain and suffering around us...
This poem is my attempt to remind us all of the debt we owe our country..
 
Ah,so often when I saunter down the land of dreams,
I see around me the India of my dreams,
Like the ancient golden bird that still majestically gleams....
 
Where poverty is an unheard-of word..
Richie-Riches aren't the only ones to be heard;
Where health awaeness is effectively widespread;
Little children don't have to work for their bread;
WHERE TECHNICAL KNOW-HOW is not RESTRICTED TO ACHEIVING MILITARY GOALS-
But just as much,to PREVENT fellow humans from wading into chocked manholes;
Where state-of-art shopping malls don't provide a front,
Hiding old-age homes and squalid orphanages for runts;
Where elders are still listened to,and revered;
Old folk arent considered 'LIABILITIES',their upkeep to be feared;
Where the youth concentrate on giving the country their very best-
Not merely chasing foreign brands an' aping the west..
Where employment and remuneration are based on honest ability,
Not dictated by your CONTACTS,WEALTH or deity..
Where there are no religious 'isms';no affluence or poverty;
Just as the Constitution promised :ALL ROUND EQUALITY..
Where old age values,customs and culture,
Are not compromised for convenience or put on sale;
ALAS!!! I AWOKE..REALITY SCREAMED!!!!!
I wondered,can India's glory be restored,just as I'd dreamed..
Or will the dichotomy persist,widening the chasm
Between progress and degeneration..tearing apart the macrocosm..
Now I know,I'll be more discerning as to whom and what I follow,
Led by the worthy and flanked by the young,I'll spread the message around..
To ensure that peace and harmony once again abound.
 
 
My original title for this poem was 'India of my dreams'...seemed apt when I wrote it..hopefully it'll have an effect on you too..
Just remember,wherever you go,however high you reach,there is lways more you can do for your nation..
Jai Hind !!
 
 
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waterdemon
waterdemon is offline comment by waterdemon    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 00:42:27 IST)
JAI HIND !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thats what i have to say :)
rajat.khanduja
rajat.khanduja is offline comment by rajat.khanduja    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 00:42:39 IST)
Awesome man. I never knew that we had guuuuuud poets such as urself on the site.

Gr8 work
pink_ele
pink_ele is offline comment by pink_ele    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 01:09:06 IST)
wow!
this is day dreaming dear
may it be true some day
meggi
meggi is offline comment by meggi    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 03:08:29 IST)
ths too gud yaar
JAI HIND :)
netkid07
netkid07 is offline comment by netkid07    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 07:22:55 IST)
gr8 work....
lokeshsardana
lokeshsardana is offline comment by lokeshsardana    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 10:08:24 IST)
worderful dude!
and if every indian start thinking like you then..ur dream will definitely come true one day.......
I m with u..

JAI HIND!
khushbu_cool
khushbu_cool is offline comment by khushbu_cool    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 10:15:10 IST)
gr88888
rhd92781
rhd92781 is offline comment by rhd92781    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 13:03:38 IST)
yeah.
We hav to be conscious of wat we must contribute to the nation
n all our actions shud be on dat direction.
The 'India' of our dreams will cum true

JAI HIND!!! JAI BHARAT!!!
prakhar_galaxy
prakhar_galaxy is offline comment by prakhar_galaxy    (posted on 22 Dec 2007 19:44:23 IST)
i dunno believe in saying but doing
kyunki our actions shud speak for us
JAI HIND
crack
crack is offline comment by crack    (posted on 6 Feb 2008 14:04:24 IST)
you good dude.........
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