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22 Feb 2007 19:08:06 IST
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Aaj bas kuch aise hi yaad aaya hai..
Apni zindagi ko aakhiri baar dekhne ka waqt aaya hai...
Zindagi bhar zindagi se pyar kiya,
Aur aaj maut se pyar karne ka waqt aaya hai.

Bhale hi mere sharir ka ant yahi hai,
Par meri maut mera ant nahin hai,
Chahe keh diya hai sabne alwida,
Lekin mera is jahan se alwida nahi hai....

Kya yeh is jahan se us jahan me jane ki baat hai...
Ya fir isi jahan mein kisi nayi zindagi ki shuruat hai....
Kya zindagi sirf ek safar hai manzil ki or chalne ka,
Aur kya wo manzil maut se hi ek mulakat hai....

Fir is safar ka har mukam mujhe manzil kyun lagta hai....
Kyun un manzilon mein dil ko sukun ka ehsaas milta hai....
Maine apne wajood me isi duniya ko apnaya hai....
Lekin khuda se apne insaan bane rehne ka wada bhi nibhaya hai.....

Mujhe shikwa nahi ki mujhe shauharat-daulat nahi mil...
Shikwa-gila nahi ki zindagi bas haath ki rehaon par chali....
Nasib mera kya kisi raja se kam hai....
Ki rote hai mere liye aaj char dost aur haste hum hai.....

Aaj bas kuch aise hi yaad aaya hai
Apni zindagi ko aakhiri baar dekhne ka waqt aaya hai........

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22 Feb 2007 19:16:43 IST
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ITS GOOD MANASI
PLZ SAY U WROTE IT(TRUTH)
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22 Feb 2007 19:34:57 IST
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its wonderful manasi.
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22 Feb 2007 19:35:42 IST
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GOOD one
u r a poeiitan
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23 Feb 2007 00:28:29 IST
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It was nice.
i believe your dream is
POETRY ENGINEERING

Just jokin

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23 Feb 2007 02:23:30 IST
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Hey sis.....
 
mujhe sirf yeh bataao ki aap kitne kalaaon mein maahir hai??

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23 Feb 2007 07:37:21 IST
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Aapki kavita to zaroor ek nagma hai
Aaapko kaamyabi mile yahi hamari raza hai!!
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23 Feb 2007 09:59:00 IST
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ji shukriya .... :)
waise thr's more also.....!!!!
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23 Feb 2007 10:10:12 IST
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The smile i see on that face,
takes me out of my distress.
whatever gives him the reason for it,
Its giving reason for a life with grace.
 
my days are sometimes odd and sometimes even,
my life is sometimes hell and sometimes heaven.
but his smile is above all places and times,
like birds singing melodious rhymes.
 
somewhere a rose seems to bloom now,
and I make sound of wow.
this world is suddenly beautiful,
I feel confident and playful
 
it is the smile of noone else,
i am seeing mirror of my case.
The thing we need badly sometimes ,
does exist on our own face.
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23 Feb 2007 10:17:54 IST
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hey Manasi
if you have written the first one by yourslves then you r one of those poets whom we say TRUE POETS like-MIRZA GHALIB

Your poems have everything emotions,excellent wordings,magnificient combinations.

So it is very hard for me to believe that you have written it yourself

Well you will get a salute from my side definitely
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23 Feb 2007 11:28:33 IST
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nothing such prakhar..... nd its by me.... but not of now.... i hav written it 2-3 yrs back.... perhaps its the lasts of mine.... now i dnt write them anymore!!!
newayz thanx for the salutes :)
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23 Feb 2007 11:37:01 IST
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sorry I  could not enjoy reading the first poem.I dont understand Hindi.
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23 Feb 2007 11:39:07 IST
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no problem vignesh.... read the second one..... hows that???
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25 Feb 2007 01:47:29 IST
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brilliant MANSI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! , WAISE AAP PADHTI KAB HAI( JUST KIDDING)
 
GOOD JOB.............
DONT EVER STOP WRITING.......................
U R GOOD AT IT..................
ONCE AGAIN
BRILLIANT..............( BOTH OF THEM............................)
AAP SHAYAR HI BANENGI ??????????
KYUN...........
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25 Feb 2007 16:52:18 IST
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thanx don .... i mean sitanshu..... if u liked it so much, y havnt i received ur rate for it??? nd as far as writing them is thr, i had already left them.....

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26 Feb 2007 04:12:45 IST
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Why did u leave ur art????
see, when u hav a talent, trying to improve that will tremendously help u in the future.......

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26 Feb 2007 04:14:50 IST
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Hey, everyone, read the foll poem....its a bit lengthy.....but toooooooooo good..
 
and...don't forget to rate it!!!

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26 Feb 2007 04:23:31 IST
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Her hair was up in a ponytail....her favourite dress tied with a bow.
Today was daddy's day at school.......And she couldnt wait to go.
 
Her mommy tried to tell her....that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand...if she went alone...
 
She was not afraid....she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates.....of why he wasn't there today.
 
The little girl went to school.....eager to tell them all.
About a dad who never sees....a dad who never calls.....
 
One by one the teacher called....a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy......as seconds slowly passed.
 
At last the teacher called her name......every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching.......for a man who wasn't there.
 
From somewhere near the back....she heard a daddy say.
"looks like anoyher deadbet dad....too busy to waste his day"
                                                                          (continued below)

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26 Feb 2007 04:39:05 IST
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With her hands behind her back.....slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child......came words incredibly unique.
 
"My daddy couldn't be here.......bcos he lives so far away.
But i know he wishes he could be.....cos this is such a special day.
 
We used to share sunday fudges....and icecream in a cone.
And though u cannot see him....i m not here alone.
 
Cause my daddy's always with me......even though we are apart
I know bcos he told me....he'll forever be in my heart.
 
And from somewhere in the crowd of dads.....her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter.....who was wise beyond her years.
 
"I love my daddy very much....he's my shining star...
And if he could, he'd be here.......but heaven's just too far
 
U see, he was a fireman......and died just past this year
when planes hit the towers.....and made freedom very clear.
 
But sometimes when i close my eyes.....its never like he went away.
And then she closed her eyes.....and saw him there that day.
 
And to her mother's amazement....she saw with surprise.
A room full of dads and kids......all starting to close their eyes.
 
"I know u r with me daddy......to the silence she called out.
and what happened next made believers......of those once filled with doubt.
 
Not one in the room could explain it.....for each one closed their eyes.
And there on the desk beside her......was a long stemmed pink rose.
 
And a child was blessed if only for a moment,
by the love of her shining star.
And given the gift of believing...
that heaven's not too far.



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