hey guys,i'm sure dat many of u hav got dat poet inside u......

so take sum time out nd share a piece of ur poetry.....

there was this poem which i wrote(o.k., its nt entirely my own,i took sum otside help).see if u guys lik it......

(u cud giv me sum rates if u lik...)

 

 

Though my love enjoys the caress of the warm sunshine,
I flee her into this dreamless lake
and gladly suffer its cold embrace,
as if the water itself could heal my wounds........

She lives above,oblivious of my pain
as she was of my love.............
while I nurse my broken heart below,
preparing it to have perhaps one more go,
to be broken once more,
to feel some more of this pain............

To breathe in the same air as her
is nothing less than calling her back once more,
to torment this wretcheed heart,
and  to destroy
what remains of myself...........

So I cringe and crawl
under the water's heavy blanket,
waiting to be overcome by the peace of death
to be mercifully blinded to her image,
never to awaken again....................